Zoo by Radarsoft in english | MSX Resource Center (صفحة 31/36)

بواسطة ro

Scribe (5059)

12-03-2017, 08:29

ren wrote:

@ro Thx.

Fixes / improvements.

Does this mean yer ready and I can release the news article then?

بواسطة tfh

Prophet (3426)

12-03-2017, 08:38

ro wrote:

ren wrote:

@ro Thx.

Fixes / improvements.

Does this mean yer ready and I can release the news article then?

Don't think so. These still have to be added into zoo.prg :)

بواسطة gdx

Enlighted (6429)

12-03-2017, 09:39

ren wrote:

@ro Thx.

Fixes / improvements.

I looked at your text until "#nothingleft". Please play the game and update it or at least the "Fixed (errors / major)" part.

"Ren" wrote:

#texts
26h,"DE TEKSTEN ZIJN DOOR DE ZON VERBLEEKT."
26h,"THE TEXTS HAS BEEN FADED BY THE SUN. " ("T"=D4h) <- Do not change the 26h!

"THE TEXTS HAVE BEEN FADED BY THE SUN. "

There is no mistake here. "HAVE" is already in use.

"Ren" wrote:

#zebrakick
--- Text of 4 lines. Number of lines is at 3265h ---
34h,"DE ZEBRA NEEMT HET U HOOGST KWALIJK DAT HIJ TIJDENS "
34h,"ZIJN GRAS-DESSERT GESTOORD WORDT EN GEEFT EEN FERME "
... (line missing)
2Ah,"HOOFD. WE PLEITEN DAN OOK VOOR DOODSLAG..."

35h,"THE ZEBRA BLAMES YOU FOR INTERRUPTING HIM DURING " ("T"=D4h)
34h,"HIS GRASS DESSERT AND GIVES YOU A STURDY KICK WITH "
2Eh,"LEFT BACK LEG. BY ACCIDENT HE HITS YOUR HEAD. " ("B"=C2h)
2Bh,"WE THEREFORE PLEAD MANSLAUGHTER... " ("W"=D7h) <-- 18 spaces.

35h,"THE ZEBRA BLAMES YOU FOR INTERRUPTING HIM DURING " ("T"=D4h)
34h,"HIS GRASS DESSERT AND GIVES YOU A STURDY KICK WITH "
2Eh,"HIS LEFT HIND LEG. BY ACCIDENT HE HITS YOUR " ("B"=C2h)
2Bh,"HEAD. WE THEREFORE PLEAD MANSLAUGHTER... " ("W"=D7h)

2 fixes (HIS LEFT HIND LEG) + bug: scrolling past line #5 in game:

OK but you suggest what to reduce the text?

"Ren" wrote:

#weaklink
33h,"A WEAK LINK IN THE CONSTRUCTION FAILS AND THE HUGE " ("A"=C1h)
33h,"MODEL STARTS TO FALL APART. " ("Y"=D9h) <-- 24 spaces.
26h,"YOU LEAP ASIDE TO DODGE THE TORSO BUT "
31h,"GET MORTALLY STRUCK BY ITS HEAD... " <-- 16 spaces.

1 A weak link in the
2 construction fails and the
3 huge model starts to fall
4 apart.
5 You leap aside to doge the
6 torso but get mortally struck
7 by its head...

Line #5 is scrolled past.

Aldeady fixed! (See about "Structure" above.)

"Ren" wrote:

#gloves
"TWEE HANDSCHOENEN"
"TWO GLOVES " [moved to A100h] (used 2 times?)

"A PAIR OF GLOVES "
"GLOVES " <-- alt

Aldeady fixed! (See in game)

"Ren" wrote:

#nothingleft
15h,"HIER LIGT NIETS MEER."
15h,"NOTHING LEFT HERE. " ("N"=CEh) <-- Do not change the 15h!

"NOTHING'S LEFT HERE. "

Aldeady fixed!

Etc...

بواسطة ren

Paragon (1947)

12-03-2017, 10:55

@gdx Eh.. Yes, it's the same document you've seen before. I've put my current/new findings (7 items) under the '2017-03-11' heading, and I've put the heading 'Prev stuff' above the previous/older stuff (which I've seen mostly has been fixed, things that are still faulty are among the 7 new items..)

- edit: removed the obsolete stuff, so no room for confusion anymore

بواسطة gdx

Enlighted (6429)

12-03-2017, 11:17

OK.

"Ren" wrote:

#zebrakick
"THE ZEBRA BLAMES YOU FOR "
"INTERRUPTING HIM DURING HIS "
"GRASS DESSERT AND GIVES YOU A "
"STURDY KICK WITH HIS LEFT
"HIND LEG. BY ACCIDENT HE HITS "
"YOUR HEAD. WE THEREFORE PLEAD "
"MANSLAUGHTER... "

Issues:
* line 5 (still) gets scrolled past;

When the player dies, the text must not exceed 6 lines of 30 characters, and the last of each line must be a space. For example, in the text above, "MANSLAUGHTER ..." is too much. Can you reduce these texts when necessary?

بواسطة ren

Paragon (1947)

12-03-2017, 13:27

Some options:

#1 Fixed and closest to Dutch original:

1 The zebra takes offense for   "
2 being interrupted during his  "
3 grass dessert and lashes out. "
4 By accident he hits your      "
5 head. We therefore plead      "
6 manslaughter...               "

#2 Freesoft version:

  The zebra doesn't like to be  "
  disturbed while eating, so he "
  tries to kick you in the ass. "
  It's a shame he hits your     "
  head instead...               "

#3 Freesoft extended:

  The zebra doesn't like to be  "
  disturbed while eating, so he "
  tries to kick you in the ass. "
  By accident he hits your head "
  instead. We therefore plead   "
  manslaughter...               "

I now realize the issue is in the Dutch original as well (at least, the version that's in TOSEC (HRB cracked))! It even skips two lines (5, 6):

1 De zebra neemt het u hoogst   "
2 kwalijk dat hij tijdens zijn  "
3 gras-dessert gestoord wordt   "
4 en geeft een ferme trap met   "
5 links-achter. Per ongeluk     "
6 raakt hij uw hoofd. We        "
7 pleiten dan ook voor          "
8 doodslag...                   "

Any votes? I guess we're trying to keep it as close to the Dutch text as possible, so #1?

(Btw: the Freesoft text makes me wonder (again) if it's truly an/the official translation? )

بواسطة gdx

Enlighted (6429)

12-03-2017, 14:51

#1 and #3 look good.

Please check all other texts displayed when the player dies.

Quote:

I now realize the issue is in the Dutch original as well (at least, the version that's in TOSEC (HRB cracked))! It even skips two lines (5, 6):

I know. Only the new French version does not have this problem.

بواسطة gdx

Enlighted (6429)

13-03-2017, 08:38

What do you think about that?

#4:

"THE ZEBRA IS INTERRUPTED     "
"DURING HIS GRASS DESSERT AND "
"WITH RAGE GIVES YOU A STURDY "
"HOOF STROKES. BY ACCIDENT HE "  
"HITS YOUR HEAD. WE THEREFORE "
"PLEAD MANSLAUGHTER...      "

بواسطة JohnHassink

Ambassador (5684)

14-03-2017, 22:05

Quote:

You leap aside to doge the torso

بواسطة TheKid

Paragon (1238)

15-03-2017, 08:20

Cool, it is the live Foxhound